Savior

1-9-2011

Fog rolls into my mind,
Seems to happen a lot of the time
I make my way threw it,
Can't stop running even though I'd like to sit
Relax a moment so I could think,
Clearly and not on the brink
Madness wants me and I am not willing,
Won't hand myself over to the creatures milling
They roll over in my mind and try to take control,
Not again and nevermore shall they suck on my soul
A guardian has come to protect me from these night terrors,
My sainted sinner of love brings me contentment without fear
So take everything you have and toss it out the door,
As long as Mi Milosc stays with me I shall not have these nightmares anymore.

Reviews

[Ruth]

Its great to have a guardian - it can keep those demons at bay, beautifully expressed hon
xx

[Moflo]

I really liked your rhymes here. Also such a happy poem, the ending is very relieving. Good job.

[XxWhatsername86]

Perfectly Amazing! I enjoyed this a lot :)

[Poetic Beauty]

I like this poem. It speaks of the inner demons that we deal with and you make it where your reader is able to relate to this terror as well as your "Charming" saving the day for you.

[InkSlinger]

Kick it girl.. pay homage to it no more.. Well crafted, I enjoyed it..

[D S Rollins]

Beautiful emotive language, and I love the last line.

[Art Sun]

Nice Stacy...those nightmares are running....away

[Coyote Poetry]

Great description and emotion in your words. I could feel the loneliness at the beginning. I like the positive ending. I hope your Soldier stay home safe and sound keeping you content. A excellent poem.
Coyote