Transition

Transition

A Poem by Leo

You're confined by a job
Earns you a living 
Perks and pay are great
Yet feels like you're the CEO's mop

The lifestyle is free
Free is a b***h
Free is also great
But you can't just be

Years have passed by
What have you accomplished

© 2018 Leo


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"Freedom's just another word for nothing left to lose."

I feel this is my soul. Sometimes it feels like a constant battle. Let me know if you ever figure it out...

Posted 4 Years Ago


Leo

4 Years Ago

Thanks Kati for reading..I'm surprised I'm receiving reviews for this..because I never finished it a.. read more
Speaks of reality. Brilliant thoughts.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Leo

4 Years Ago

This poem is far far far from completion lol but thanks for the review nevertheless..
i feel very lucky and this poem reminds me how lucky i am to be teaching...i have never considered that a job, or work...just enjoyment and fulfillment...however, for many years, 30 i worked in Restaurant and had many other "just jobs"
and they made me feel what this poem expresses.
good work here.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Leo

4 Years Ago

You definitely bring up a great point of view. Teaching implies constant learning and personal growt.. read more
your thoughts are sublime in terms of life

Posted 4 Years Ago


Leo

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your review, blessings

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Added on July 28, 2018
Last Updated on October 11, 2018

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Leo
Leo

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(Soul writer/ fellow/ DOB Aug 1982) I had the privilege to visit over 55 countries throughout my life and always eager to reflect or read another poet's work and leave a constructive feedback. .. more..

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