i knew...

i knew...

A Poem by Shoshana
"

rough around the edges

"
i knew we were done
when you said to go
i knew we were done
when you called me a hoe
 
but nothing oh so bleak
can turn me to a freak
if all you say
is to tell me to go

© 2019 Shoshana


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Shoshana
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Wow, the emotion is real. You have raw and pure talent that's rare these days. 'I knew' oozes pain and toxic love for something harmful. Bravo

Posted 5 Months Ago


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Added on September 4, 2019
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