Lewmon

He was difficult

He was kind

He was stubborn

Yet he was mine

Now he's gone

Somewhere with

a girl that doesn't 

deserve him.

I want to 

be with him

all the time

so my soul may rest. 

Yet once again

he doesn't like me

I don't think 

because he pushed me away

and probably HATES ME.

WHY IS THIS HAPPENING

WHY IS THIS HAPPENING TO ME

WHAT DID I DO

WHAT DID I DO TO DESERVE THIS

I THINK I LOVED HIM 
I THINK I LOVED HIM IN EVERY WAY 
I THINK SHE LOVES HIM
I THINK SHE LOVES HIM BUT HE DOESN'T LOVE HER

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

There is a trap many of us fall into when we are unsure of ourselves and this very poignant write appears to support this. We fall hopelessly in love and forget reality. If the chap left why continue to give him such love. He does not deserve someone who loves him unconditionally.

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Any heart will go down if it goes through such conditions. Yet it happens to a lot of people. Well written poem though!

[Lea Sheryn]

Your words pull at the heart.

[Shoshana]

Thank you for that :)

[Lea Sheryn]

You're welcome. :-))

[Dave Brown]

unfortunately the heart business doesn't always guarantee the right beat
Like they say, (who are they?) there are more fish in the sea, hopefully a beauty will come along

[Shoshana]

indeed, thanks for your review. :)
-S

[Dave]

This is so moving. Isn't it a shame that love doesn't come with a set of directions. There should be rules that you must follow. Breaking hearts is a serious No! No! but we all get into the "game" and hope that everyone plays fair. If we're lucky we might win or at least come out even.

Take care - Dave

[Shoshana]

Yes, agreed. Thank you for your kind words! I appreciate it.

[DAH]

love this closing line: "I THINK SHE LOVES HIM BUT HE DOESN'T LOVE HER".

Good job on this fine piece of word-art!

Cheers,
DAH

[Shoshana]

Thank you so much!

[DAH]

My pleasure!

[Lydia Shutter]

When a love goes bad and the relationship ends, it is never easy. It is not necessarily something you did. It takes two to make a relationship work. Very emotional write. Lydi*

[Shoshana]

Thank you, Lyd, i appreciate your helpful review.

[Jovilious]

LMAO WTF
this is actually great hahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahha

[Shoshana]

LOL im fr deaaddddd .....