The End.

The flicker of oblivion shown upon our bodies

A cat's cradle of limbs-the anatomy of the end 

And I wonder if this is how God feels,

Unbreakable as stone,

Left with our bodies and the soil

And all the promises He broke, the Visionary

Left with His masterpiece,

An orb of blood red and ice cold.

I think I know how God feels,

I bet He feels alone.

Reviews

[Rachel]

Wonderfully written, and I love the message.

[doreen cyr]

powerful write and you may be right
doreen

[Debbie]

pedestal.
I liked the conciseness of the images here...and I would have to agree that if God had an vestige of humanity within, He would feel very alone

[Stephanie W.]

Thank you both.

[Reeses]

Wow fricken wow. That lyke really woke something up inside of me. It was as if a light bulb went off in my head. I'm now wondering if God feels alone even when he has the whole world. ~Reeses~

[Caitlin Nicole]

Wow. This is very powerful. I often wonder the same thing. This poem is great. Awesome job =]