Life on a Tune

Life on a Tune

A Poem by Steph's Script

I have summoned you dear friend

Because no longer can I keep my breath.

I call you for the last time.

So sing to me,

Play me a spinning melody

To preserve my mind

As it was in childhood.

Please --

Continue turning,

Until my last words

Are no longer clear.

© 2011 Steph's Script


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The second line is a little confusing. Is there supposed to be an "I" somewhere in there? I like your references to turning, spinning, etc. Along with the music, I'm guessing it has something to do with a CD? Maybe even a vinyl record?

Posted 13 Years Ago
Beautiful piece!flawless!

Posted 13 Years Ago
Fascinating

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on February 25, 2011
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Hello, My name is Stephen and I have loved writing since I can remember. I have a variety of interest from writing poetry, comics, stories, and even rap lyrics. I, like many of you, is simpl.. more..

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