Cocoon

Sitting -

 Foot thumping,

       Pulsing,

Red Swollen -

  Behind red flesh lies 

a beating cocoon,

        Harboring inside it a storm of fortune,

Telling life of limited movement,

   Slow sinking steps -

        Eventually collapsing

on the one leg keeping it lifted. 

  

Reviews

[Casper]

I fully agree with Blue. My favorite line is:
"Red Swollen - Behind red flesh lies"
I don't know why, but I really like that part.

[Maureen Mwaniki]

Short but very effective and it could read in so many ways i gues its just whatever we make it out to be!!has a classy complexity to it too!i like it lots!