I Love The way

I Love The way

A Poem by KAREN
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love being expressed btween a couple!

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I love the way we take moon light walks,

and have very long talks.

 

I love the way you tell me you love me very much,

and say mushy words and such.

 

I love the way you look so neat,

and so very sweet.

 

I love the way we walk hand in hand,

and sometimes we don't walk we just stand.

 

I love the way you kiss my lips,

and wrap your arms around my hips.

 

I love you so very much.

I hope I show you with every touch.

 

And by the way,

I'll love you each and everyday!

© 2010 KAREN


Author's Note

KAREN
Another try at poem writing! May be corny but here it is!!

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it is corny, but corny in a good way, if that makes sense:D i love it. keep writing, your really good:D

Posted 14 Years Ago


nicely written poem...

Posted 14 Years Ago


I think you are much too modest. Sincerity and individuality come through this poem and that makes it very "un-corny."

Posted 14 Years Ago


not corny at all! you need to stop saying that you are "trying" because this IS poetry! you have succeeded! its beautifully written and I can tell it is straight from your heart!

Posted 14 Years Ago


(: cute

Posted 14 Years Ago



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