Opposite Girl

Opposite Girl

A Poem by KAREN
"

On and off relationship!

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You think you give me pleasure,

make my life adventurous.

 

You think you're attentive,

but all you do is neglect my feelings.

 

You think you're humorous,

you're not funny at all.

 

You think you have extravagant taste,

if you did you would love me for me.

 

You think you make me happy,

I'm sad all the time.

 

You think you lavish me in love,

confident I'll never leave you.

 

WRONG!

 

You make me feel like an opposite girl,

you're in

you're out

You don't love me enough to make up your mind.

 

You make me feel like an opposite girl,

you love me

no, you hate me

I know which one it is, you think I don't.

 

You make me feel like an opposite girl,

beautiful

wait, you're ugly

Delicate. feminine, delicious that's me!

 

You want me to be an opposite girl,

here it goes.

I want you gone, not to stay.

I want you far, not near.

 

I've seen your back side more than your front side anyways,

GOOD-bye!

 

 

 

© 2010 KAREN


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love the concept! this is something that is so easy to relate to!

Posted 14 Years Ago


i loved it!!! that has meaning:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Ron
Good work I love third verse as men do that all the time. It only works for a short time! One typo "oppsite". I would love to see you dump a man by saying all this to his face!!! Imagine his jaw dropping and manhood shrivelling! Really good read well done!

Posted 14 Years Ago


wholy cow, this is some piece of art. i loved it.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on December 11, 2010
Last Updated on December 13, 2010
Tags: on, off, love, hate, beautiful, ugly

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KAREN
KAREN

Harrisville, MS



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I love to write and cook! Me and my sister will soon be the author of a children's book titled Feelings Feelings Feelings, and a cookbook in the near future titled Two Heads In The Kitchen. I e.. more..

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