Tell Me

Tell Me

A Poem by KAREN
"

Getting strength from above!

"

Tell me father,

of my splendor you so carefully molded.

Let me hear your knowledge and wisdom,

giving me assurance that you're not done with me.

Breathe on me blessings of peace.

 

Tell me father,

that my face is blossoming into something sweet and tender.

My laughter is like billows of music filling your ears.

bestow  upon me your comfort when I am weak and weary.

Inspire me to always look to you for guidance.

 

tell me father,

of your immortal love, that it last forever,

and my love for you brightly beams.

Let your voice be  an never ending whisper in my ear,

filling me with your precious strength.

 

Tell me father,

that we are like eagle wings,

soaring high above the earth.

Help me leave a trail of your friendship where ever I go,

filling people's path with your glorious glow.

 

Tell me father,

life's swiftly passing years have been to your liking.

Even though I've had some dark hours

your mercy is new each day.

How excellent is your loving kindness!

 

Tell me father,

once again about heaven and the streets of gold,

and the crown you're keeping safe for me until my time comes.

Wash me in your abundance of love.

Keep me safe for all eternity.

Amen

© 2011 KAREN


Author's Note

KAREN
Hope who all reads this finds themselves feeling peace and love from above. Hope it's a good enjoyable read, tell me what you think!

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What a lovely, prayerfull poem.....quite beautiful. My favorite verse is,
"Tell me father,
that we are like eagle wings,
soaring high above the earth.
help me leave a trail of your friendship where ever I go,
filling people's path with your glorious glow."

There's one little grammatical error in the next verse. The line should be, "life's swift passing years have been to your liking."
Great job with this poem!




Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Oh wow i like this alot,
This really moved me, it's very inspirational.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I liked it and it did give a since of peace when you read it out loud.
Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful poem of peaceful images for me. Loved it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is an extremely well crafted poem! It's beautiful. It has a natural flow that, if I may, reads like a Psalm. A prayer like this should be on everyone's heart.
Thank you for sharing!
-Jeffrey

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is absolutely beautiful and a wonderful. prayer like write that I hop sows some seeds in all hearts of those that read it..lol and God bless you..Kathie

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a lovely, prayerfull poem.....quite beautiful. My favorite verse is,
"Tell me father,
that we are like eagle wings,
soaring high above the earth.
help me leave a trail of your friendship where ever I go,
filling people's path with your glorious glow."

There's one little grammatical error in the next verse. The line should be, "life's swift passing years have been to your liking."
Great job with this poem!




Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow. i am litterally speachless...if i could copy and paste this whole poem into this box as my fovorate quotes from it, i would.
i seriously have no words. wow.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A lovely piece of writing...a peaceful read...wonderfully done..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awsome write. Excellent summary of what The Father has revealed about Himself in His Word.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 14, 2011
Last Updated on January 18, 2011
Tags: God, love, strenght, peace

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KAREN
KAREN

Harrisville, MS



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