A Poem by KAREN

When you're afraid to talk to someone!



you don't know me,

but I wish you did

my heart will be unsatisfied

until I make myself known to you



one simple word,

but I'm unable to speak when I see you

my legs fail to move, they want obey

all I can do is stare



you're so handsome

your dimples make me smile

our bodies  would fit together like a puzzle

the sound of your voice is like  music to my ears



I know you see me staring,

the want in my eyes does not lie

Do you feel the same?

Do you want me too?



I close my eyes and I see you

we're arm in arm,

your lips teasing mine

you're undressing me with your eyes



one simple word I have decided to say

all you can do is turn me away

I put one foot in front of the other

as I near you I realize I can't do it


Tears streams down my freckled face,

I turn to walk away

I feel the warmth of a hand on my shoulder

I turn around, then I hear one simple word




© 2010 KAREN

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Haha Awwwwww, amazing how one simple word can be such a hassle for your tongue to form to. I liked the rhythm of this poem, even though there is know legitimate rhyme scheme.

Well Done :D

Posted 12 Years Ago

Aww! Thats SO sweet!

Posted 12 Years Ago

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OH this is so sweet and loving. I really enjoyed this.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Awee :] It's sweet...I like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago

I really like the repetition and the ending made me smile. Love it :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

You should enter this in a competition. This is good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Very Good! This was so cute :) The ending was delightful. The repetition was well used :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

I think it's great!

Posted 12 Years Ago

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I like it . You made the word "Hello" strong within this whish is difficult! I just so jealous of that luck male wretch!

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on December 21, 2010
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