Symbols Of Love

Things that causes you to love a person!

Your love

that lives deep in my

heart:

Like the blood pumping through its  valves.

Your kisses

that wet my lips:

Like the early morning dew.

Your smile

that melts my soul:

Like the flame of a candle.

Your eyes

that watch over

me:

Like the angels above.

Your arms

that hold me

tight:

Like the wedding ring on my finger.

Your voice

that whispers in my

ear:

Like soft music playing.

Your promises

that you never

break:

Like the beating of my

heart.

Author's Note

Trying a new set up! Tell me what you think?

Reviews

[Ron]

Good to see a poem where someone still loves their husband! Or perhaps he is not her husband at all and the ring is a ring of guilt!

[Stacey Watts]

This was very beautiful and heartfelt. The words flow gently and it was very romantic and sweet. Nice work!

[Rossen]

like the rapture only a harp can capture
you have pulled back my heart string
sending warm vibes into me
Rossen

[Julie Beth]

i loved this amazing job :)

[shedevil]

this was a great style for this type of peom, good job! i would love to see more work like this in the future.

[?]

I absolutely loved this, very well writen.
Romantic, even a bit sensual
Loved it
thanks for sharing with me enjoyed the read

[Sara Mercury]

It should be, "Your eyes that watch over me" (there are two eyes - it's plural = an eye watches, but eyes watch.)

Other than that, it is a very well-written piece! I loved the similes!

[JanieB]

I really like this, just wished it was a little longer..

[Brad]

awwww, you big softie...i feel all melty now....

btw...kept hearing "how deep is your love" by the bee gees in the back ground...what the heck?

[Stef Outsiders]

It looks really good and reads well, very romantic too! good job!