Evil Lady Of The Night

Eyes are like flames of evil,

lips of pure sin painted red.

She roams the woods,

hunting her next  prey.

 

Wolf howls, runs in hot pursue

of a small rabbit.

Voice quivers in delight

as crimson blood spills onto the ground.

She creeps closer, heart pounding as

the wolf pounces toward her.

 

Strong arms subjugate her.

An arrow flies through the air,

painful moans cry out in the shadows.

Hot breathes flow across her neck.

Angrily she turns to face her opponent.

She found him to be voluptous,

her veins surged with hunger.

 

The imprint of his touch lingers

long after he has released her.

Contrive brain comes up with a plan.

Poisonous ambrosial lips touch his,

and he's caught in a web of sensual desire.

 

Her indulgent hunger filled,

she leaves his naked body,

and travels on through the murky woods

in hunt of her next victim.

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Amila Jay]

An excellent write :))

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice and short tale of a hunter with a great hunger never to be fulfilled. I like the flow of the story and the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sarah Wlochal]

I was caught on the edge of my seat with this poem. I enjoyed how you worded this with a lot of imagery.

Great Job! :)

[grayhaven]

Very haunting, yet so sensual. Well done.

[WindSong]

I was on the edge of my seat reading your poem. It is action packed with a lot of powerful vibrations. I felt I was there. Great poem, indeed!

WindSong

[Tina Kline]

Fantastic story with very impressive imagery. It was like watching a movie as I read the words. Excellent writing!

[Pretty Faces Split Open]

Really amazing imagery here, I saw the entire thing perfectly. Well done!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Very vivid and enjoyable. Like the predator/prey feel to this. Nicely done.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Words used make it have a noir and vivid feeling, love it :)

[Brad]

oooo, this was mythic!! loved it