Resisting Spells

Resisting Spells

A Poem by Archangel Gabriel
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Resisting Spells

Protect me from this fairytale

as it will not end too well.

For the old witch in the forest deep

has cast her evil spell.

And as it holds me captive,

forces me to do her evil bidding

I turn full circle and chant right back

“You must be bleeding kidding!”

© 2013 Archangel Gabriel


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Well done! the humor at the end was a lovely twist. Nice rhyme scheme and respectful to the mood and style of the old fairytales.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Archangel Gabriel

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Steve.
Wow, that last line - made me laugh - nice surprise ending there!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Archangel Gabriel

10 Years Ago

Glad to oblige my Lady!
even though it's dark, it's also cute and very light! silly and great poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Archangel Gabriel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Dana just fun.
I love that! Nice little feelgood poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Archangel Gabriel

10 Years Ago

Thank you just silliness really!
I enjoyed reading this...a cute write:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Archangel Gabriel

10 Years Ago

Many thanks Rose

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Added on June 6, 2013
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Archangel Gabriel
Archangel Gabriel

Halden, Norway



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