My Last Words To You

Real event :(

It was the last eye contact we had

You and I in the last confession stand,

Your hands are holding mine so tight

But your heart was shivering from a fright.

 

You were walking with me while the sun records

The music that you played on my chords,

And every word you split on my lonely heart

The sun caught every thrown dart.

 

My last words to you I said with my teary eyes

I love you baby, and I said that twice.

Hopping you will reply by the same word

But you left this happiness only in your world.

 

You walked away not even with a little glance

Ignoring the fact that I love you and I want a chance.

What would’ve happened if you hugged me at that time?

And said that one day you can be again mine

 

You broke my little heart that was beating for you

But even every piece now in it is calling for you,

I loved you and I will always do and away from the crew

I will always believe that one day I will be a part of you.

Author's Note

I hope you like it :)

Reviews

[cycy]

"I loved you and I will always do and away from the crew
I will always believe that one day I will be a part of you."

Well written Sue

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Thank you dear..i appreciate your review

[Ravyne Hawke]

Sadness, pain and hope as well... a beautiful poem of love, break-up and the hope of finding one another again. Well done, stars.

[Blood Ink Diary]

A serrated pang mingled with a lingering ache in the poem ! How we mortals oscillate in bliss and pierced pangs. Keep penning. Cheers

[MsJewel]

I will always believe that one day I will be a part of you.
Do we ever forget those we love or have loved? I don't think so. I think there is a specail place in our hearts where they stay...and find us again..when we least expect it.
Your poem is lovely.

:) Julie

[Chris]

Spoken aloud - this has a deep melancholy and dreamy tone...

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thank you very much

[Chris]

why thank me...was you words, thoughts and tones that held me. I was thanking you...

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[Latifa]

The sun caught every thrown dart.
I like this line,fine writing dear and very sincere.

[Leslie Philibert]

this convines, I believe you...

[A. Amos]

A graceful and eloquent write, Bravo,

[Dhaye]

There's a big difference if you believe...

When we love we cannot say goodbye that easy, can we? I can relate to this piece. Keep going.

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we cant..whatever the reason was..it is not easy