Happy Birthday My Yas

Happy Birthday My Yas

A Poem by stars are far


Happy Birthday My Yas .. 



And five years have passed with one promise

“Forever”, we said one day, that was five years ago.

And here we are now, on the road of the eternal friendship

Calling ourselves best friends, and true ones we are.

 

I remember the first day I met you with a hobby that matched

You and I , loved writing like it was a part of us,

A “thank you” message is what set us on the way

And gave us the clue of the eternity…

 

We kept talking days and days and more than months have passed

Remember? , there was that msn that we used to chat on at 6 pm

One hour that time limit was, and we always took advantage of that

It used to be the best hour in my day, and I guess yours too.

 

Time passed by when you crossed the seas and mountains

Just for us to meet and make our friendship memorable,

No picture held us together but memories did,

The chocolate you got me that was wow… The best…

 

And now, years passed and here we are growing up to stay young

You are now a professor and you can’t believe how proud I am of you.

You spread you knowledge and made everyone believe in you

But I’m sure you already know that I always believed in you…

 

Sometimes you make me go all crazy and want to kill you

I feel like I will make your blood float all over the Milky Way

So I just block you and leave you until you are calm and I’m chill,

I come back like nothing happened, because I know that we are bffs …

 

Sometimes I hate you like I want to make you die,

Then when I imagine you dead, I start crying... And yeah I laugh…

You say I’m crazy, but I know that if I’m no, you’ll never be my friend

Because my craziness is what makes me unique, yeah, that’s it.

 

And today, 21th October, we are going to celebrate the birth of you

You were born 30 years ago and you are still young and will forever be..

So let me just say Happy Birthday to You My Yas …

I hope you will always shine bright, forever and always …



© 2014 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
so yeah 21-10... tomorrow is my bffs bday, he was over here, soulcrusader(yas) ,i dunno if any one knows him, but yeah we met here...and since 2010 we've been best friends .. and forever we will be ...

I love you yassiii <3 <3 <3... :)

wish him a happy bday please :)

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Very interesting birthday piece, though as terrible as the relationship may seem to the outside world there is a lot of heart of meaning, of importance within this piece which really stood out to me. Wonderful job with the emotion and how you went about crafting this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A very sweet way to say happy birthday.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Good work, one of your best

Posted 9 Years Ago


stars are far

9 Years Ago

no its not, i know ive written better threads, but because its for someone special ,it is wonderful .. read more
You used your talent really well to convey such a lovely and interesting birthday message. I really felt the meaning, almost hidden inside. It is quite long I guess, but it is really easy to read and it painted such a clear picture in my head. Well done :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very interesting birthday piece, though as terrible as the relationship may seem to the outside world there is a lot of heart of meaning, of importance within this piece which really stood out to me. Wonderful job with the emotion and how you went about crafting this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i just do not know how to take this!! it sounds like a horrible relationship to me .. i would rescue my daughters from such a destructive mess! ... i read some of the comments and i ask myself what am i missing here? .. you want his blood to flow over the Milky Way?? .. you want him sometimes to die?? and you are best friends forever?? he is 30 yrs old?? .. perhaps i have to come back tomorrow and read anew .. but stars are far!! i would say run girl .. fast and far! i hope i am getting this one all wrong
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


stars are far

9 Years Ago

haah you know he teases me alot ,considering me his little sis, and i get angry fast so yeah i feel .. read more
Einstein Noodle

9 Years Ago

boy did i take it too seriously didnt i!? ;} ... must have been my coffee! glad you have such a frie.. read more
Einstein Noodle

9 Years Ago

ps. or the My Yas in the title threw me .. i read it as a bit of sarcasm (my a*s) :)
E.
Very sweet tribute to a bestie that all can relate to. An interesting relationship friendship is, and you have painted it well.

Posted 9 Years Ago


a wonderful way to celebrate your friends birthday, you used your talent well, lovely poem :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


a fine tribute, you write very well here..

Posted 9 Years Ago


lovely story and nicely woven emotions, wish u a best time on your bf s bday

Posted 9 Years Ago


stars are far

9 Years Ago

bff* hehe thank you :)
very sweet story, thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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