Since when..But you are

Since when im nothing ?
and you are everything ?..

When do you became like people
eating me as if i was a piece of meat..

Since when i became a wheel
for your car??...

Since when i became a rose
that is given in Valentine
and then it belong to the trash ...
it became from the world of UN-existing

But if you stepped on my heart
if you stepped on me
if you killed me

i will say
for my last breath
i like you
i love you
i adore you

and i will never forget you
my love..my life

Author's Note

i dont think its good..
what do you think ??

Reviews

[Darryl Davis]

I think the concept shows promise. A tightening of the grammar would give it a bost IMHO.

[Yina]

I've felt exactly like this. I got my heart completely totally crushed an stomped on but still there were those special feelings. Very good!:)