Autumn

Trees are saying Goodbye
Here in this world
In the garden in fort of our houses
Resting in peace
Trees that were hit-en by the breeze
Eyes on the falling leaves
Ears on the crying sounds
Not everyday but only today are saying
           GOODBYE

Reviews

[Sweets]

This is beautiful :)

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

Lovely...

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Another wonderful write, today you are on a roll, long may it continue:)

[EMF]

I love the play on words in this along with some of the imagry and themes. But one word will stay in my mind fro a long time. I'm even going to nick it. hit-en. Be it typo or intentional it is a perfect discription and if it's a typo for goodness sake don't change it.

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This is wonderful i enjoyed this.