Where Did You Go?

Where Did You Go?

A Poem by Daytonight
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A sad and lonely poem

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Where did my knight in shining armor go
wherefore art thou my beloved Romeo?

Where is my Mr. Darcy with all of his charms
sweeping me up into his strong arms?

Where have you gone my Lancelot so dear
I am waiting here so lonely as your Guinevere.

Where is my Prince Charming ever so sweet
to carry me off with glass slippers on my feet?

Where did you go Bogie, are you there at all
can you hear the heart of your loving Bacall?

Where are you Antony, crossing the Nile
to be with your Cleopatra for a while?

Where have you gone my elusive Romeo
here is your shrewish Kate, where are you Petruchio?

Where did you go oh love of my life
when my one desire is to be your wife?

© 2011 Daytonight


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Absolutely stunning, brilliant imaginary and I loved your captivating word choices, I find my Knight in shining armor just 5 yrs ago, I enjoyed your poem very much so and thanks oh so much for sharing xoxo

Posted 11 Years Ago


creative and clever, fantastic penning, keep up the amazing work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very creative and cleverly penned, this shows real style to weave your piece around their love stories, not many of theirs ended well in fact most ended badly by death and seperation, lets hope your fella and you are the exception. keep em' coming

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very creative !! I loved how you used the fairy tales and the famous love stories to create this wonderful piece ! Another great write :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful :]

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

seems like totally cheesy at first.

but then you read it and its rather unique, good job

85/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely done, I love the references, we all search for our soul mate, great job on this one

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dunno bout theothers...but I used to be the Robinhood:)

what a bubbly poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A delightful poem to read. It flowed well..and loved each stanza!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow this is amazing, loved the rhyme scheme and flow.
Wonderful write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Daytonight
Daytonight

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