lots of questions..

Trying to send you a message
by my eyes i couldn't
Trying to make you feel
my love and honesty
but you don't want to
Trying to tell you
how much i love you
but you didn't listen

Why??
Why do you hate me baby?
why you are moving on me everyday?
why you are not considering my heart ?

Lot's of why's in my mind
answer me about only one

What ?
What i did for you to dump me ?
What i did for you to kill me ?
What i did for you to forget me ?
 
Lot's of what's moving in  my mind
answer me about only one

Do?
Do you really hate me ?
Do you have a new girl?
Do you have a new life without me ?
Do you really want to forget me?

Lot's of do's are moving o my mind
answer me about only one

When?
When you are coming back my love ?
When you are going to tell me the truth baby ?
Where you are going to know how much i love you ?

Lot's of when's are moving on my mind
answer me about only one

Are ?
Are you going to be me ?
Are you leaving my life ?
Are you trying to make me die ?

Lot's of are's are moving on my mind
answer me about only one

lot's of questions are moving on my mind
no answer for each on just like im blind
i loved you, yes i did
but the only thing i want you to do
is to answer me and always be my friend


              I adore you as will always do
                    love you forever til i die
                           no reason for such love
                                 but the only reason is that
    you are still the same you
             and i love you ..i adore you 
                     my love.. my life .. my heart ..
                           my only soul in this life ...

Author's Note

i loved this poem a lot ..
what do you think ?

Reviews

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

Love it...

[Fontane Wong]

Sad and heartbroken one. And it's quite emotional. The questions are popping up like bubbles about your sadness flowed through this poem gently. There are many quetions in our life that we'll not understand, like why do I love her? Why would she love me? You can never get the answer for this, because love is love, and that's no formula or explaination to it. A superb poem.

[TJ]

such a sad poem of a broken heart

[Yina]

This is really good. You do really good with putting feelings in a poem:)

[Akshat♥]

i think you really did a excellent job...
i think how you love somebody..someone
is also there for you..wanting to make you happy:)
because my dear life is full of up's and down's..make your mind clear
about the fact that sometimes choices are hard..you have to take
right chances..hope you will understand..
poem is fantastic though..loved it!!! very related to me..
going to my favorites :)

[Sukriti Suki]

Nice work...we always have these questions and many more. Initially I thought you were going to ask the 4 W's and 1 H.. What, Who, Why, Where and How. I like the Do and Are....good one.

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This one is full of pure emotion,
Like the structure,

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Excellent love poem, at its best:)

[EMF]

You are an exceptional poet and this is one of your very best. Can you rate 500/100

[Enigma]

Wonderful and impressive structure of the poem. I liked it. :)