Today's life

this is the life that we are living and seeing theses days the real life

Sitting here
no voices
no smiles
All what i see
is their frowns.
Can't take it anymore
wanna kill them and go on
No one could hear
or just try to feel..

Everyone is walking
and thinking:
me..me..and just me
There is no you
There is no us
There is no we

Nothing i could say
in loud or scream.
Nothing i could do
to them and to you.

Just wanna move on
and forget the human
wanna live alone
and find my real home.

Reviews

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

Terrific...

[EMF]

Terrific. Social isolation and wanting to belong. All capsulised here. Great. I looked forward to reading this and wasn;t disapointed

[Enigma]

A wonderful poem. Capturing the thoughts when all we see is the sight of so many people cucooned in their own individual life with a sad and irritated "frown" to greet the outer world. In contrast to this, a "real home" would be something where we could be our own real selves and be accepted for the same with smiles and laughs, not frowns. Great write!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I think like what you have wrote here as well. Beautiful:)

[Sukriti Suki]

a nice piece. Very well written. The emotion is strong and conveys well to the reader. We have started living lives just being too materialistic and self centered but humanity still has some hope. Lovely work again.