Dream Crusher

Im not a writer 

i m not a dreamer 

and that's all because of you

you crushed my dreams 

and burnt them 

they became aches 

you throw them away 

and you said :

"that is better for you "

why you are so heartless

you don't ask about my future 

you don't care about present 

and you never took a look on my past

Can you believe this ?

you who raised me between his arms

is making me cry 

is making me no more a human

So i need an answer now 

I'm what ???

Author's Note

i wrote this when i was super angry
hope you love this

Reviews

[Jackson Lai]

The best writing I've ever see.

[EMF]

Bleak, despaing and angry as hell. Curious the way exceptional work can come from such pain

[Jeremy Baker]

You sound super angry! Nice flowing style and emotive word choice. Great stuff!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A wonderful heartfelt deep poem. Love it:)

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This is amazing!
Love, Love, Love this.