mother said

mother said

A Poem by Sunny

my mom said

i had a habit

of fixating myself

on people

so when you

came along

i fell hard

 

my mom said

i trust too

easily

maybe that's

why it didn't

take long

to reveal

my secrets

 

my mom told

me that i'm

desperate

that's why

it was so easy

for you

to sweep me

off my feet

 

my mom said

i care too much

maybe that's

why it hurt

so much

when you left

 

my mom said

you were bad

for me

i never thought

that was true

maybe i'm

just bad for

you

 

© 2014 Sunny


Author's Note

Sunny
This is really unorganized and was written in about three minutes, so don't judge too harshly.

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Sometimes it takes a while to find the right person. Sometimes the easiest way to find them is to just.... stop looking. That's usually when they tend to appear.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is lovely. It makes me think of my own mother and of my own children.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Sunny
Sunny

beaumont, TX



About
I'm Sunny, and I'm probably bored at the moment. My poems are really easy understand, too. (It's actually pretty pathetic.) And don't be shy to mail me a letter. I can literally make a conversat.. more..

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A Poem by Sunny