the narrative at the door

the narrative at the door

A Poem by surajsharma

Were we playing a game that once hung in the balance and now hangs
in silence as it draws to a finish and ends to diminish all the
trappings of desire and the tease that this fire once flared in our
hearts and our hearths now is branded a disease of a youth waning, please
just tell me, was it all a game?

Were we only keeping scores of our ignorance as it soared with a passion
for the boring and the asinine conjectures of a roaring late adolescence
when everything made more sense than it should have, retrospectively
but actively, we plotted as we jotted all the diktats of realities
of suburban localities where the cutting edge bleeds into the very mouth it feeds

while the hands that once rocked the cradle now folded in a prayer
are pleading for the biting to just stop, and the writing to just
drop the emotional-baggage on the floor and leave
the narrative at the door.

© 2012 surajsharma


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this had me holding my breath... 'bleeds into the very mouth it feeds', so perceptive



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love the last stanza the best, amazing write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

like it, ressembles a bit of "Tim Minchins the comedian" work !
It totally rocks though....i like it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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