The Valentine Bell

I hear some murmur in the air around,

Deep within it is a pleasing sound,

Carries endlessly throughout the long day,

And moves with me wherever I stay.

 

 

The jingling bells all have silent grown,

Christmas over and the new day gone,

Something special is awaited every year,

Day of love that draws us near.

 

 

I wonder if the murmur reaches those ears,

Where a part of me rests with no fears,

To tell you how much you are missed,

Every second of a day I spend.

 

 

Listen to the murmur carefully someday,

It is the song to which my heart sways,

Tells you that you will be loved ever,

No matter what happens between now and forever.

 

 

The murmur i believe is for the valentine's,

Season of love, greeting cards and chocolate cakes,

Let this murmur stay in our lives ever and ever,

And we both separate - Never Ever!

 

 

- Swateek Jena

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

A very sweet and lovely piece from you, it flows nicely and the vocabulary of the write is really simple, which is a good thing. I loved how you portray a mutter that breaks the silence in our minds, its really a curious sound to follow, and can benefit us for the better.
Amazing piece, keep it up!

[natzky]

what a lovely poem...it seems that your longing for something...heheh...really sweet..keep on writing..:)

[Swateek]

thanks @Tai...and thank you @Shadat