For once we will be us

For once we will be us

A Poem by Ardra

You always make me want more of you...
This distance and the destiny...stands in our way...
Every day I dream of us....in our wonderland...
Even when I know... it will always be dreams ..nothing more ...nothing less.

The dreams in which you always hold me close to your heart..I hear you whisper my name.
The dreams in which you kiss me tenderly...yet passion fills my soul...
The dreams in which you caress me,making me burn..
The dreams in which you fill me with you and ignite me with bliss
The dreams in which your hands are always in mine - promising me of eternal love.
The dreams in which you and I are no longer separate or desperate - we are one, one happy soul.

How I love these dreams that keeps me alive and takes my breath away.

Deep down I know it will only be in dreams we will be us.
I still have our dreams ....that no one can take away from me....
The life will go on....I will keep on dreaming....hoping some day the sea will bring you to me....the sky will shine bright....the stars will smile upon us....we will be us .... for once we will be us....

© 2016 Ardra


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This is intense yet reverent to love, to the need for something more than a wish or dream... We all need that little more that comes our way.. but perhaps separations are hurdles waiting to be climbed. One can only pray so.

Your feelings are so private, i feel like a voyeuse.. wondering if i should read a second time. But, no.. will leave prayerse for the tangible one day, when your words can be shared after a kiss. Beautiful writing, ' ..How I love these dreams that keeps me alive and takes my breath away '

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Ardra

7 Years Ago

thanks a lot emma for the review :)
guess the hurdles are there so that we can overcome them.. read more
emmajoy

7 Years Ago

Smiling and nodding agreement. Thank you!



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wonderful write!
keep writing :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ardra

7 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for reading and the review :)
Our actions define us, our words connect us, but our dreams sustain us. Good work, Ria.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ardra

7 Years Ago

Thanks Ted :) happy to see your review
The romantic longing in this one is palpable, Ria. Even in dreams, a relationship can seem very real. I liked this. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ardra

7 Years Ago

Mmmm true lydi....thanks for reading .... :) and your reviews always are so insightful

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