enjoy life

a short poem about having fun please give me your opinion

you gotta have fun

dont let the time burn

 cuz once a minute is gone

it will never return

just enjoy your life in every possible way

enjoy every second every minute everyday

life isn't always sweet ,sometimes its's also sour

but if you'll give mesoury a minute ,give happiness an hour

so dont leave in your heart any place for despair

cuz i know you can find joy everywhere

 

Reviews

[stars are far]

really nice and i think you are a hopeful girl
keep going :)

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you rhyme vari well, reads well : )

[sweet candy]

thanx kim S. very much,you are the first to review my writings on this site and i really appreciate it.
you inspired me to keep on

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Wow! Love your poetic beat and flow.
This is wonderful and inspiring.
I like this write, so nicely written.