Unpleasant Surprise

Unpleasant Surprise

A Poem by Norma M Sutton
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One of the hazards of writing outside

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Writing on the porch

Last sip of coffee eww

Fly on tongue I feel

© 2017 Norma M Sutton


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A very sobering moment indeed!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Short witty poem. Well crafted, Norma M Sutton.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'C'est la vie', porches, coffee, flies and all. Lovely senyru (or haiku?) ... has 'eww' got two syllables?

Posted 2 Years Ago


Norma M Sutton

2 Years Ago

Lol in this case 2. Long e, long u
lol,i can relate,great haiku

Posted 2 Years Ago


Norma M Sutton

2 Years Ago

Thank you.
Some moments and a fly can make us wish for covered coffee. You said enough in the short poem dear Norma.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Norma M Sutton

2 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.

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Norma M Sutton
Norma M Sutton

Bostic, NC



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Norma Moore Sutton has written and published two children's books: The First Lamb and Harry Goes To The Fair She has written and published the first book in the Haunting Memories Series: Matthe.. more..

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