Into the Darkness

submission for what happens next

Falling down into the darkness

Swirling out into space

Sparks fly with bright sharpness

Just hinting at shape

Falling down into darkness

Eyes wide open shut

Emotions all are heartless

Deep in the quiet quiet hut

Falling down into the darkness

Hiding from the true light

Sparks jump to and fro

Lighting up the dark night

Reviews

[Willowtree]

"Eyes wide open shut" is absolutely my favorite line. Great poem!

[Madame Mystique]

I like this piece, and i just love the picture you chose for this poem ( Huge Alphonse Mucha lover :D).

Thanks for reviewing my poems :)

[The Analog Kid]

It may be the unknown, but things are happening. Giving in ,and going for a ride into the abyss. Nice.

[Honeypot]

This is wonderful. It's got a really nice pace to it and made me stop for a moment after I read it and just think and absorb it.

[A.Lee]

I like this one. Fantastic imagery. Usually I point out one stanza or line that I liked best, but I can't pick just one out of this piece. They're all intricately wound together and they all are equally as good. Nice job.