Made You Mine

When he loses interest.

My edges are not as sharp to you.

I've become dull to you.

My words don't slice right through you like they used too.

I'm afraid I've carved you all wrong.

I should have made you beautiful.

Instead I made you mine.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is so good...and such a wonderfully ironic twist at the end...
impressive write, Sydney.
j.

[MrsHydrangea]

WOW!! Now that is short and powerful! This is one of the best poems I have read here on Writer's Cafe.
It literally made me ache. (strange...I know) You accomplished in 6 lines what some cannot convey in a lifetime. Simply wonderful!