Diamonds?

Diamonds?

A Poem by .SaveSydney!.
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Hmm, not my best. Read&Review. <3 *NOTE; I wrote this while listening to Diamonds Aren't Forever by Bring Me The Horizon. :D

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Sparkle,

Shine,

It's princess time!

No.

Diamonds.

What a jewel,

So profound,

So..

Legendary.

What does a diamond mean?

 

Love,

Or,

Lust?

Marrige,

Or,

Money?

Either way,

Diamonds aren't forever.

 

© 2010 .SaveSydney!.


Author's Note

.SaveSydney!.
Hmm; wasn't sure about this one. Please tell me if there are any spelling, or gramatical (sp? lol.) errors. :) And honest opinions, always welcome. I'll return the favor. :D

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Original and very creative...Yaritza told me I would like it...

Posted 13 Years Ago


engaging formatting~ compelling topic~ and What a delightfully whimsical reflection on a piece of shiny bauble which mankind has imbued with such significance~ much enjoyed!!!~

Posted 13 Years Ago


haha i like it. To many people marry for money. Some people get married thinking their in love and end up getting a divorce. I don't see the point.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I liked this one. I agree diamonds aren't forever. Divorce happens. People get sued for the return of the engagement ring. I loved this too. My favorite of yours so far. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Honestly, I loved it! It's quite post-modern. I find it daring and eye-opening. Fierce poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


cute :) I think maybe the flow was a little off, but who am I to talk about flow :)
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Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on July 20, 2010
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.SaveSydney!.
.SaveSydney!.

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Hai; the name's Sydney. But i'm sure you figured that much out already. Hah; i don't consider myself an epic writer, it's just something i do a lot. I'm very music oriented, mostly techcore, crunk.. more..

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