Pillow

Pillow

A Poem by .SaveSydney!.
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I know this is not my best..at all. :/ But please, please, PLEASE review. :D

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Soft,

Feathery,

And comforting..

You are my best friend.

 

Now I wonder;

Can you hear my pondering thoughts,

As I lay my head to rest at night?

Best Friend, do you ponder along with me?

When you are soaked;

With bitter, salty tears,

Do you feel my pain?

Best Friend, do you mourn with me?

Do you silently answer,

My questions,

On the unspeakable concepts?

Best Friend, what all have you seen?

And now;

Are you laughing at me?

For realizing,

That you know myself,

Better than I.

Best Friend, can you hear me?

 

© 2010 .SaveSydney!.


Author's Note

.SaveSydney!.
I personally do not think this is one of my best; I wrote it half-asleep, based off of a thought I had; "What if pillows could read minds..?"
So, please please please reviw.

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I write a lot of my poems right before I'm about to sleep, and a lot of them make no sense at all. So feel lucky you wrote one with some coherence, haha. Anyways, interesting write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


this totally reminds of something i wrote, "I'm a Pillow." hahah anyways, i love this! Great work, i love how personal you get with said pillow. Amazinggggg. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hahahahah u rele were sleepy:)
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Posted 10 Years Ago



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.SaveSydney!.

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Hai; the name's Sydney. But i'm sure you figured that much out already. Hah; i don't consider myself an epic writer, it's just something i do a lot. I'm very music oriented, mostly techcore, crunk.. more..

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