Thunderstorm.

Thunderstorm.

A Poem by .SaveSydney!.
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I wrote this after a thunderstorm. :) Haha, review please!

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Rain drops.

Pelting my window,

Blowing at an angle.

I sit and watch,

Wishing I could feel them.

 

Lightning.

Stikes in the distance.

I gaze,

Wishing it would strike me..

 

Thunder.

Rolls and cracks,

Booming at full volume.

 

I press against the cold glass of my bedroom window,

Wishing I was outside,

To feel the beauty of a thunderstorm.

© 2010 .SaveSydney!.


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.SaveSydney!.
Honest opinions, please. :)

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O.O You REALLY don't want lightening to hit you!!
That s**t is HOT!!
(lol)

Posted 9 Years Ago


i thought it was scary? ok, not your best. like i can imagine this. so good imagery :) idk its good, but not your best. captures the thunderstorm.
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Posted 10 Years Ago



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.SaveSydney!.
.SaveSydney!.

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Hai; the name's Sydney. But i'm sure you figured that much out already. Hah; i don't consider myself an epic writer, it's just something i do a lot. I'm very music oriented, mostly techcore, crunk.. more..

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