Waste.

some people are a waste.

People like you, they have no place.

The strings on your mind have been broken.

All you do is take, take, take.

After that you think we should keep our heart's open.

You need the attention.

That's the one thing you're good for. 

Then you bring in tension.

You're rotten to the core.

People like you deserve chances.

Just like your fellow brother.

All you can think of are dances.

To stomp on others.

You're sweet then haunted.

I've seen this first hand.

My heart by you has been taunted.

All you do is demand.

You're excuses are ridiculous. 

How do you come up with such trash?

You make me sick of this.

Learn to have some class.

Author's Note

this is horrible, but i needed to vent.

Reviews

[.........]

It's a nice form of venting. I hope you feel better after it, but you know, this poem brought a little sense to me, just a little eye-opener for me. I guess i am guilty of a lot of these things that you wrote about here. Kind of... stomach turning come on here. But it's good. I like the first stanza and the third.

[Shardbearer99]

There sounds like a lot of anger being expressed in this poem. But you can understand and sympathise with what the writer is expressing. Writing can be a really good way of expressing how you truly feel. Can you possibly check out either my story Dark Destinies - a romance (well, supposed to be), or my story I came up with late last night called Long Rise the Dead? Thanks

[(Loveless)]

It sounds bad but I understand sometimes you gotta let out your feelings and It gets across strongly how you felt its gud how you have written it

[trainwreck]

For a simple vent, this was very well-written. It actually brought a few people to my mind. As far as a basher poem, it has a solid structure and great flow. I like it.