Leaving.

Leaving.

A Poem by Sydney Evans

Let's run away my dear.

We'll find our way.

We

      can't

               live

                     in

                         fear

We can't become astray.

 

Our hope for love holds promise.

My dear we're going to be fine.

The way I feel about you is endless.

These feelings are divine.

 

We have to reamin true.

Faithful we must stay.

Our love we can prove.

With you i'm not afraid.

 

© 2011 Sydney Evans


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Nice nice nice .. !! do not know why but when I read this it brought a smile to my face .. so .. thank you for that .. and as usual the poem is very nice and so is my favorite rhythm and rhyme format used here ..
good work Sid !!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is very cute! you say dear a lot just when your talking in class and stuff so i can very easily picture you reading this poem aloud. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


That's amazing! I really liked the ending . Keep up the good work ! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


wow awsome X3

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i really liked the stair type lines...
poem is awesome..thanks for sharing:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Always better to travel with two. Safety and comfort in numbers. I like the flow and emotion of this poem. A lot of hope and desire to do some traveling. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was extremely cool. Good job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sydney Evans
Sydney Evans

Eaton, OH



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