All About Her

this is a boy's point of view.

She smiles like there's nothing to worry 
She wanted those burdens to be buried 
She's drowned by the problems she carries 
It makes her look like an old lady 
She told me she's fine 
And flashes a fake smile 
She let others tease her and hate her, hurt her and bash her 
What should I do? I wanted to help her? 
Last night, I was walking 
On the pavement where no one's passing 
I came from school that night 
My only companion was the moonlight 
I was shocked when someone grabbed me 
He told me "Give me your bag and your money" 
I was horrified when I saw a knife 
I thought, "That knife can take away my life" 
"Let go of him!" someone shouted 
I was shocked when I see her in a hooded jacket 
The man laugh and he was about to stab me 
and that ended the story 

Author's Note

ignore my grammar. i'm not really good at english

Reviews

[Tori Jones]

This is amazing! You're very talented, and I can relate to many of these feelings...great write. You did way better than you think, there is almost nothing wrong with the grammar...Thanks for posting, be blessed!

[Sylvia]

Thank you so much. I appreciate what you said.

[Tori Jones]

You're welcome!