Queen

Queen

A Poem by Tamme
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It a power trip.

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I am Queen of Fire
Do you still want to hold me?
I will singe your mind, heart and soul
Burnt to the third degree...

I am the Queen of Ice
You'll never see in my mind
I'm frozen in and out; no emotion
I live in place you can't find

I am the Queen of Metal
Try and bend me for your need
I don't move that easily
You might as well concede

I am the Queen of Stone
Do you wish to see me cry?
Weakness is not my fancy
It's just what I live by.

I am the Queen of Power
Did you think I was a frail chick?
My inner strenghth may hide
But your a*s would be easy to kick.

I am Queen of all you can't see
Ever wonder who creates you fears
I have the control-- I am the control
I am the master of your tears.

I am the Queen of the Night
Ever feel like someones watching you
I live in the shadows you can't see
It's me when you don't know who

I am the Queen...
Are you sure you want me
The last woman on Earth
That's what I'll be.
 

© 2008 Tamme


Author's Note

Tamme
Sometimes a woman needs to let the rest of the world now exactly where they stand. :)

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I like the tone of the poem. Very direct. I don't think that I want anything to do with the Queen. She sounds tough.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

You are definitely the queen after reading this piece. I love the way you started each verse with that same line driving the point home. This is a very enjoyable piece of work and I am glad that you sent it my way.


Wonderfully Written!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I like this....I love the way you start each stanza with i am the queen.

Great job!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

great flow and imagery... I loved this poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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