ABC's of Anxiety

This was for a contest

Always basically caged

 

...demands...

 

Elusive fragments

given help...

 

Illusions judge

Knowledge loyally...

 

Means nothing...

Ogling pretty questions..

 

...reason's steady thoughts

uncovering vermin

with x rays

 

yielding zilch.

Reviews

[Rain]

Looks like you inspired a few people with this piece. Very clever. Rain..

[Jaclyn]

Ah ha! Clever clever! Very cool....I would write more, but this makes me want to write my own version, so I don't know if I can be totally objective. Hehehehe...thanks for the inspiration!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Excellent job capturing the essence of this problem. To the point in so few words. Thank you for sharing.
Light,
Siddartha

[Dorothy]

This is great! Your words capture anxiety well! It is great that you can write so well and yet stay within the context of the contest! Great work!

[Jet Lag]

very nice! apparently the judge had a thing for child care! my A Baby Coos won this thing... lol.

i remember well those days you describe. they do grow up ... from trampling on your toes to trampling on your heart! enjoy every day and stage!

[Robert Luna]

Hey I had that idea to do this kind of abc's piece but just haven't around to it yet. LOL Oh well you beat me to it. I loved this and thought it was done great and really flowed with such a great presence of its own. You are showing that you creativity has return with full force I can see. It is always a pleasure reading your words.

Great Job!!!!!!!

[James K. Blaylock]

I really dug this piece. Congrats on the win!

[Sean M. Addams]

very interesting piece .... flows and it gives me a different way to view my abc's ... very well done

[Tania Leigh]

Very clever, Tamme....I like it, and I see you won an award for this....congrats! :-)

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

I liked it....Loved what you did with the letter X.......Great!