Hanging Low

In limbo I find it hard to withstand

I find it difficult to take a stand

The twists the turns

Please release me from these yearns,

I was left at the doorstep

With tears in hand

And you had no quarrels with leaving

As I wept,

In my life one minute

Out the next

Seems you had no worries

As you left,

What we shared I thought was great

I was clearly mistaken

Where did I go wrong

Did I leave in your heart that much hate,

I just can not comprehend

Which way to go

Where to turn

So by this noose

I hang, hang real low.

Reviews

[Blotter]

"in darkness you may catch me napping, sleeping the sleep of unrest and testing the feel of rough hemp against my neck, do not disturb this coming sleep, in darkness do not question my napping"

[Tarry Franck]

I love that so much!!!!

[TPK Stories]

breathtaking...that's all I can say...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lover Of Words]

Your way with words is breathtaking thats all i have to say :) Great job

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[Lover Of Words]

You are very welcome

[quinfinn]

sometimes a person is just an empty shell with no real love to offer, they may tell pretty lies or half truths to get what they want but....well, you know what happens so i won't beat it to death. excellent write.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you my friend and yes I do know what happens unfortunately

[quinfinn]

;)

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful emotion and thoughts in the poem. Some questions are hard to answer. With time we will try to understand and grasp. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much Coyote