Heart And Hands

The twilight danced across the pond

Gleaming with such radiance

As I lay upon the awns,

The water lulling me to sleep

And gladly accept

Less time for me to weep,

To weep over a love

Like I've never felt before

Felt so purely

Like a white winged dove,

You flew into my life

And I hold that love very dear

For to me we share

A love coming together as if it were twilight,

I hold you in my thoughts

Since you are miles away

Ever so strongly

Deep within my heart,

And there my love you shall rest

For to me, my love

You are simply the best,

The test of time, our love, I trust will withstand

As I grasp that love

With both, both heart and hands.

Reviews

[OBWhiteHawk]

Wow that's really beautiful. I understand these feelings well the yearning and the passion.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear friend

[Taylor H.]

You use different dialect than most poets. Well done. Stand out :) love the photo

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Taylor H.]

np

[TPK Stories]

Such a beautiful love!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the beautiful and positive poem. I like the words of love and appreciation. Good to hold love with heart and hands. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote

[Frieda P]

You had me with the first two lines, it'a lovely Tarry, but I won't even ask.

Not crazy about the double 'both' in the last line, it's redundant, otherwise I really like this one....

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Frieda

[Lover Of Words]

Wow i am speechless... Love it beautiful job

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear