Dance

You dance in the light of day

You dance in the light of the moon

You dance in my heart

And you danced so soon,

You were so light on the love

That you shared with me

You took my soul

And set it free,

I admire you

More than you will ever know

And I'm blessed

For you were long overdue

And this love will forever flow.

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

An interesting piece indeed...I found myself falling into a different state of mind as I read the words. The repetition of "dance" (which I don't normally love) was done so very well here; the point was made and then you just kept gently nudging us along. And then, "And I'm blessed/For you were long overdue" made my heart skip a beat. Nicely done.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much for such kind words

[TPK Stories]

Nicely expressed! Loved the dance! Beautiful!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Starrleena

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Good to know the dance of happiness. I enjoyed the hope and positive feel in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote

[ANTO]

When I look look from a distance at the poem as a whole - the layout resembles a cup or a chalice and its very apt because it seems that your 'cupeth runneth over' with love Tarry.
God Bless you
X

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you - God Bless you too

[shallimarRose]

"You were so light on the love
That you shared with me
You took my soul
And set it free,"

Beautiful poem.. xo

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[Antoñyo]

If ever a poem danced....This is a pleasure to read because (if you don't come to critique) you get taken in by the pure joy, then respect and gratitude follows, as it should, and you share in that as well...well, I did.

Thoroughly enjoyed this, thanks for sharing

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much for the kind review...glad you liked it.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Absolutely lovely! I enjoyed this.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much

[Lover Of Words]

This is breathtaking spectacular!..... You dance in the way of an spectacular artist my dear.... This poem is like a painting as you read it it flows so nicely... I love it

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much. Glad you liked it! :)

[Lover Of Words]

I love it!!!
:)

[Sami Khalil]

Life has its dances , love does too and so does this poem...:)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[MikeV]

Very beautiful! From the sounds of your poem, you found true love. Congrats! :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much