Questions

Searching for for my solution

I’ve lost my words again

Rhythm has gone and failed me

Alone in this bitter end

How did my life unravel

How did I come undone

How’d I deserve this madness

How can I overcome

Drowning in all my questions

Riddles that taunt and prey

I’m on my knees and begging

Mercy to end this pain

I cannot stop complaining

Bleeding hearts never do

How am I so pathetic

I’ve lost myself for you.

Reviews

[Lively-Heart]

This is amazing. I saw you on the "New writers" list, and thought "Okay..So I'm not the only new one here!"
I clicked on your page and this title popped out at me. So of course, clicking on it and reading this poem of yours..I fell in love, and will be reading your other poems as well.

Keep up the good work!

[Alucard6336]

Sounds like an unnecessary sacrifice. You shouldn't lose yourself for someone else.

I read this one because of your username, and I am glad I did! You have a real skill when it comes to this thing we call writing.

As for me, I have a complete heart of darkness. I vowed to never let light come into it again. But alas, I am still just a pawn in a dark twisted game.

Please, write more. I love this poem. Great work :)

[Tasteless Heart]

Thank you so much for your kind words. I fear I'm headed down the same path to where you are, but perhaps there's still hope for us both. In the meantime, writing serves as a welcome respite!