Just dont let me go.

dont let me go,
not just yet.
we can make it last forever,
just dont let me go.
you say your wasting my time,
i want you to use up every second.
you think i can do better,
but if there is anything other,
then baby i dont want it.
just dont let me go.
we had everything right,
so why did you leave me that night?
the feelings i have for you,
they are real and true.
i sit here and drop a tear into every word,
there goes another.
i lay there and dream of us together,
oh it would be nice.
just dont let me go.
we could belong together.
couldnt we?
everyone keeps telling me to move on,
so i do my best to act.
is it working?
oh how i hope so.
but the one thing i want more than i want you,
is for you to be happy.

Reviews

[AllyKinzz:)]

My dear sweet taylor, this yet again is another great piece. You have a good way of showing your emotion through every word. At the end you have a small gramatical error but you know that. I find its best to capitalize the first word of every new line. Other than that, great piece.

[Taylor Munnerlyn]

ahh its supposed to say i want to let you go so i cant keep you from better**

[KayDennyy!(:]

Omg! babe,
im so sorry about this, he will open his etes and tell he lvoes you!

[Reedoh]

I love you. I wish this was about me. ahahha kidding:D


It is really great though. :DDDDDD *claps hands*