16.

16.

A Poem by tessa victoria
"

Rico X, inspired me to write this.

"
My age. 
It's a number.

Like yours.
32.

1,2,3,4,5
6,7,8,9,10

Mine happens to be 16.

Okay so, maybe I can't be professional at all times,
but you don't know me.
I can be silly

dramatic


sad

depressed

lovely
caring
all me
in one petite four foot body.

My writing can be admired, forgive me
but give me a chance and see
that I can be as great as someone big out there

Either today or 30 years from now.

© 2015 tessa victoria


Author's Note

tessa victoria
I just felt like some people weren't exactly giving me big enough chances to fully admire my work because I'm sadly, only 16. I feel like this could possibly be a spoken word poem.

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oh yes I am liking this ....

and these were well thought out lines that showed some growth and maturity


My writing can be admired, forgive me
but give me a chance and see
that I can be as great as someone big out there

Either today or 30 years from now.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Hun, don't let those ignorant people get to ya.

Your work, I do admire. Very much.

Like how you made your age apart of this poem. Makes it speak volumes.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh yes I am liking this ....

and these were well thought out lines that showed some growth and maturity


My writing can be admired, forgive me
but give me a chance and see
that I can be as great as someone big out there

Either today or 30 years from now.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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