Needing Paint

Needing Paint

A Poem by Trée

Trev watching Em paint.


Holding on

the death of me
Letting go
the fear of me
Fading away
becoming other
Needing paint
needing color
Pour me
your hue
Tarp me
your shade
Glaze me
your tint
Wash me
your tone
Rain me
your bow

© 2009 Trée

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This is one of my favorites Tree. Wash me your tone, rain me your bow, beautiful expression and my words are not doing this justice.

Posted 9 Years Ago

The line:
"Rain me
your bow"
made me smile. I really enjoy your diction and flow, especially with this poem. It's so simple, but the emotion is extremely crisp and vivid. Very refreshing! Thanx for writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 21, 2009



Franklin, TN

When I was in college I was told I should not consider a career in writing. For the next 20 years I wrote nothing. About three years ago, I discovered blogging and fractals. I started posting fractals.. more..

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A Poem by Trée