Look At What They Did To Us

Look At What They Did To Us

A Poem by thisXgirlXcanXrawr(:

Look at what they did to us

And don't ignore this fact.

Because you know it's true

Even if you don't like the impact.

 

They ruined our life

They feel no sorrow

For us at all

Our life's will not be any better, especially not tomorrow.

 

They made fun of you and me

And they didn't care if it hurt

Of if we even cried

But you and me both know, Thats how they'll always be.

 

Ruining out life was their goal.

They deffinately did that

They even hurt our soul.

 

But no matter what we do

They won't stop hurting us.

But believe me ''Were after you.''

 

 

 

 

 

© 2009 thisXgirlXcanXrawr(:


Author's Note

thisXgirlXcanXrawr(:
I know this is REALLY stupid, I was terrably bored. but please rate and comment. thanks =]

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I don't think this is stupid at all.
This sort of thing is going on all
around the world all the time,
on big and small scales.
And I like that last line "But believe me, were after you.""
The fighting back line! There's still hope for those
who are being hurt and don't want to take it anymore.

Great job here. Like this poem a lot.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on October 27, 2009

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