A few small words

A few small words

A Poem by thisXgirlXcanXrawr(:

A few small words 
That's all it takes
To make me happy
A and put a smile on my face

Everyday I think of you 
And when we'll be together
Because honestly
I want this to last forever

I don't know how you did it
But your always on my mind
And you know what
That's completely fine

© 2010 thisXgirlXcanXrawr(:


Author's Note

thisXgirlXcanXrawr(:
I don't know how to finish this one and it's killing me lol, any advise??

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It was pretty good. A few words can brighten your day or destroy your soul. I would suggest ending it with showing the other side of the coin, so to speak...

Posted 14 Years Ago


Great job on this poem. Be creative and make an amzing last line and it will work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this. It shows how powerful words can be to make us happy or sad or simply used to hurt, destroy or create wonderful feelings in someone. It also shows how important someone can be in our lives. Nice job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Maybe you can end it with something like: "A few small words Is all it takes To make me love you." But honestly, this is your poem and you're the one who should finish it, not us.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 27, 2010
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thisXgirlXcanXrawr(:

Indianapolis, IN



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