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Weakness of the Eye

Weakness of the Eye

A Poem by thatemogirl16
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Just my thoughts on war

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Weakness of the eye,
War,
Tramatized by what a serial killer quite enjoys.
The killing of people is pointless.
The people who'd rather use violence than words
are just despicable.
There's no point in killing each other when it's not going to benefit you in any way.

Why?
Why do we train people to go onto the battlefield just to die?
It's perposterous to me.
People may be thinking,
"It's for America"
"It's the other countries fault. They started it"
"It's about strength"

But you see, I don't care.
I don't care if it's for America because I hate America.
I don't care if it's the other countries fault, we're at fault as well.
And you really think this is strength?
Strength is crying every night, over every single think you've done in life, and yet,
You're able to put a smile on your face the next morning as if nothing happened.

So why don't people just shut the hell up.

© 2015 thatemogirl16


Author's Note

thatemogirl16
ignore some spelling mistakes, but i love critiques from everyone. The harsher the better.

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thatemogirl16
thatemogirl16

Louisville, KY



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