Running

first poem.

  You were running

  from the pain.

  We were all trying

  to catch you.

  You were too fast,

  we were too slow. 

  Now your gone we

  never got the chance

  to say goodbye. 

Author's Note

ignore the shitty grammar. this is my first poem. dont hate.

Reviews

[Jess Holden]

mhm very amazing :)

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Hate? Far from it you have written in very few words, a vey poignant piece quit putting your poety down!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe...it's sad, but good poem. Keep up the good work!
Thanks for sharing.

[Alice In My Own Wonderl..]

Its good for a first poem. Keep writing, dude.