Rainbow

Rainbow

A Poem by the_kate

Rainbow in the sun

On a warm summer ev'ning

After the rain ends.

© 2011 the_kate


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Great one and very good picture.I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Sunflower

Posted 14 Years Ago


I don't think this is a Haiku right? Because the second lines contain 8 syllables. The word evening has 3 syllables ... e - ve - ning ... maybe you can break it into 'ev'ning' so that the line contains 7 syllables.
Nature has always been an inspiration for me and I love it. I also love rainbows and this short write is simple, and so beautiful. You captured the feeling you get by the rainbow bringing warmth by the sun after raining. Very imaginative.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Short and sweet. Amazing. Rainbows are just beautiful. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Just three lines brought so much beauty!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very nice view this is. I saw one about a week ago made me feel just like this haiku... Appreciative of nature.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I can never fit anything into a Haiku. Or iambic pentameter. Nice one.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Few words but full of meaning! I love to see s rainbow after the rain!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on November 17, 2010
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the_kate

Emrald City, Oz



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I'm a younger writer, and I live in a small town out in western Kansas. It feels like the middle of nowhere sometimes. I write because I want to get away from this place. When I write, I can go anywhe.. more..

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